Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Inner Monkey














Jeff: You remember that Biology class during our ninth grade.
Evan(smiles) : Yeah how can I forget that class. I'm sure I pissed him off real bad.
Jeff: Pissed is even a small word. He went insane after he read your poem at the back of your homework copy.
Evan:He had all the reasons to be mad. He realized I mentioned monkeys to be better than humans and especially better than the homo-sapien who taught us Biology.
Jeff: Do you still have that poem ?
Evan: As a matter of fact ! I do. Here it is .. (:|)




Jumping over few leftovers, the dogma
Our evolution is merely a joke
We yearn for that sweet banana
Lying in the debris of lies, our lives chain-smokes

Angels with tails, no wings flaps here
Morality subdued , sidelined by the fear
Fighting over the past mythologies
Present is an oasis of cries, outcome of theologies

Snatching one's smiles from others
Trying to be better than the other, we suffer
Corporate sophistication engulfs this jungle
Survival of the sickest is our royal rumble

Politicizing free will by mastering the names
Democracy or Dictatorship , everything is the same
Medical breakthroughs by experiments of primates
Bending nature's law, mother smiles on our fates

Loving each other due to physical similarities
Assimilating wisdom on top of fake solidarity
Religion is just another reproductive cycle of faith
Nothing ever changes if we read Bible or Macbeth

Jumping from these branches of intelligence
We shrine on such traits of divine negligence
That greedy teeth, power and money hungry
I scratch my back , by this stoned epiphany

There goes my banana, my jungle, my lust
Its all me , self-obsessed center of the universe

"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." - Albert Einstein

6 comments:

nan said...

Our evolution is merely a joke

Encore ! ;)

Present is an oasis of cries, outcome of theologies

Simply WOW ! There is no limit for your imagery !

Snatching one's smiles from others

Another human trait !!!

Bending nature's law, mother smiles on our fates

I reckon D DAY is not far away ;)

There goes my banana, my jungle, my lust
Its all me , self-obsessed center of the universe

Gosh that was seriously too good !

And as always no to forget the footer ;)

Vinnie said...

in addition to Nan's comment...

//Corporate sophistication engulfs this jungle
Survival of the sickest is our royal rumble// LOL!!

every word in place..good work, Evan!

Pretty Me!! said...

can i post my fav lines too ??? but then i will post all the poem here in the comment section again !! Gosh!! where do you get such ideas ??? sorry .. i shud ask, where do you get such words for ideas ??

Satans Darling™ said...

I had fun reading this one! Most of the Homo Sapiens sure are worse than monkeys :P I second vinnie, Every word is in its right place!

*Applause*

Ragpicker said...

@nan : There you go ..breaking down the soul of my poem with a surgical precision only to make it more lovable than before. Thanks for your wonderful feedback again. :)

@vinnie: Thanks for the reading and pointing out the funniest part in the poem. Even I did a lol reading that same piece of line once again :P.

@prats: I absolutely don't mind to scroll down the comment section and read the poem once again. The comment section is your world. Write,cut ,copy , paste ..do anything that your heart tells you to do here. Remember

"There goes my banana, my jungle, my lust
Its all me , self-obsessed center of the universe"
<--- thats your comment section here---> he he :D

Coming to the words origination .. I guess after approximately 22 years of my life of shit digging, rag picking and ass kicking .. the pseudo wisdom has dumped enough of trash in my head with a whole barrel of foul and painful words ..like the way i way crafted this sentence too ..you see I speak a lot .. :P :D

Thanks for your feedback again !!!!

Ragpicker said...

hey ashrita .. just in time :) ... thanks for your feedback and yeah I loved your new work...I have placed my views on that !