Monday, April 20, 2009

Sifar
















This is by far the most positive lines I have ever written in my entire life. I wish to thank that stranger angel who touched me with a wind of change and turned the wheels of my life forever. This is dedicated to you my quantum physics friend and mysticism enthusiast ! God Bless Ya ! :)

I made a promise to myself a few hours ago,
Something that I should have done have a long time ago
Just closed my eyes,drenched myself in the rain
Said goodbye to those whys, said goodbye to my pain

I made a promise to myself this evening
Theres nothing that can stop me from flying
Theres nothing so louder than the silence of peace
Theres nothing so melodious than the sound of a fresh beginning

I made a promise to myself with a smile
I'll breathe free and speak true as I walk every mile
I'll look into the sky and open my arms for the birds
As I carry my bag and start this journey westwards

I made a promise to myself from the heart
All my yesterdays are just few lines on my hand
I have a wind to chase and ride on a happiness cart
I have a dream to dream,I'm the water and I'm the sand

I made a promise to myself like the child
Who collected stones and marbles in the wild
Whose innocence reflected the clarity of his mind
And this child is reborn, his ambitions unwind

I made a promise to myself like the soldier
Who shall never leave a fallen man behind
Whose will is concise and thoughts are clear
Who feels alive , who hopes and become the light for the blind

I made a promise to myself on a pillar of truth
If promises were made to be broken , then I'll prove
That this promise is rendered eternal as it could
I'm a satellite in the space like I'm a cricket in the wood

I made a promise to myself like today never happened
I'll bring a smile to everyone, I will ever meet till the end
Wipe the tears , crush fears and make each moment count
As I carry my bag and start this journey westbound
Yes I 'm found !

If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead, either write something worth reading or do things worth writing.
Benjamin Franklin

9 comments:

Satans Darling™ said...

Wow! This kind of stuff coming from you, now that is some new trash :) Loved it! Loved the vibe! So good to read positive stuff from you :)

Congratulations on being found :) And all the best for all the new findings coming your way!!

The poem is a masterpiece as usual, touched my heart and made its mark, yet again :)

Hope you're doing all fine Rag... I missed the trash while I was away :P

Sauron said...

Liked the vibrancy and positivity here.

Of course, as usual, it's well-written... :)

Vinnie said...

God bless ur stranger angel!

u found urself n how!

God bless u too :)

Ragpicker said...

@ ashrita : hey look whos back !!!! :D .... So how was ur exams ??? my trash missed your feedback btw ...
Glad that this positive work touched your heart !!! Indeed I was tired of negative poems and the same sort of dark themes with different flavors. Tried my hands on something new.
Tkc care dear !!

@sauron : Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your heartfelt response.

@vinnie : Thanks for such a touching comment. Yah god bless you too :)

nan said...

There is nothing so louder than the silence of peace
There is nothing so melodious than the sound of a fresh beginning

*bows*
you know what ? these vibes send a gush of positive energy through the readers blood :)

I have a dream to dream,I'm the water and I'm the sand

Gr8 that you ve started to dream \m/ ;)

I'm a satellite in the space like I'm a cricket in the wood

Yeah so typically you :P

As I carry my bag and start this journey westbound
Yes I 'm found !

*Claps*
This is a profound write.

Glad I read it and sorry I took so long to read and dissect :P

Am waiting for that moment when I ll find myself :D :D

Satans Darling™ said...

Hieee Rag :)

Yes, I'm back. The exams were good, but I did not make it through the final round. Gotta work harder next time! Waiting for your next post :) :) :)

Sonya said...

Thankyou :)

Aj said...

sweet man...

Aj...

Ragpicker said...

@sonya : welcome. I hope you can see the difference now !!! and where are you lost these days ?

@aj : thanks man ...welcome to the backyard !